Improvements from the Feedback

From the feedback results my partner and I have improved a lot and we got to understand by having a class discussion with our media students and our teacher, it had benefited us a lot as we received a lot feedback.
On the left side, this image was from the original rough cut, we had changed it by using the brightness/contrast tools. The result is viewed on the right. You can see the difference between the original, I am happy with the result after using the tool as it created the image to be more smooth and relax because of the colour tone.


We got recommended to zoom into one of the windows as the woman character named Anna was seen with the affair man in a hotel room. However we decided to keep it as a pan shot. As audience are able to see the exterior building of where the woman located at.

The left image is from the rough cut; this image was very dull and had no colour to it. Therefore we used the brightness/contrast tool to even out the colour and add more brightness. Also we used the cropping tool, now you can see; the top part of the teaser is shown. I am happy with the outcome as you are able to see the image better. (the image on the right).

Many students had advised us not to use this shot because of the lighting issue, the location did not have a lot of light. Also the camera technique was not good. So my media partner and I had decided not to use this shot.

This shot is very effective, as it’s only seen at a 1 -2 second duration in the teaser trailer. Therefore we manipulated this image by applying the colour green to bring out the colour of the grass so this would bring out more focus of the action. I am happy with the result on the right.

We had realised the colour black was not good enough to create meaning, although ‘tell no one’ a real media text do use black shoes. However after the feedback, we decided to use red shoes as it added a lot of meaning.